Saturday, September 27, 2025

Reaching for Odessa, Part VII
Donal Awakes

A Work in Progress
74


At dawn awash in real light not electric
after a night becalmed Donal noticed dew drops
sparkling in sunlight in the sailboat’s attic
a metaphor high up in the shroud tops.
A well-positioned web with little hope of flies
a spider’s food supply at risk far from land
but a spider can wait weeks before it dies
while a soldier in a trench must make a last stand.
A spider existing aloft bereft its supply chain
showed Donal the way to slay the minotaur
destroy his supply lines so he’d have to proclaim
some kind of victory to explain the slaughter.
And then his spell broken and with his end near
An uprising makes the minotaur disappear.

So Donal set sail with spider webs glistening
giving him a compass to steer west-northwestward
shouting defiance with no one listening
for he was alone going purposefully forward
Irishly planning programming a master graph
showing nodes and connections of a war machine
allowing discoveries without any math
because visualization lets human eyes key in
to high value targets on a cinema screen
handheld in the field by a wounded warrior
able to guide stealthy weapons in between
defenders attacking without fear or favor.
Reaching for Odessa by a circuitous route
sunshine on his shoulder his mind astute.


Dick Russell © Richard M Russell
                       2025

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